00:00
00:00
crazydaydreamer

17 Audio Reviews

12 w/ Responses

Nice tune

The tune is nice, but I think different choices of instruments might have made it better. Only my opinion. The beat is also everywhere, the song might be more unified if the beat was more simple or succinct. Keep making music!

DJ-Grapefruit responds:

Thanks for the review ;).

Light feeling

This song is nice because it has a nice light feeling and yet a trancy hard beat. I almost think though that there might be too much reverb and flanger that it makes the song sound too echo-ey. But I can tell what you are going for and it sounds nice.

GuillaumeChevalier responds:

Thanks !
and I noted that for my next song about the echo.

Nice house Music

Hey! This is nice chill house music. I think the "deep-d-deep" is a bit overplayed though, needs more instrument time. A longer song that has more variation might be nicer. But the beat is nice to bounce to, keep working!

TheMadWasp responds:

House music eh? Why didn't I think of that?

I wasn't sure about variation, I needed to make the cymbals and the snare rolls as loud as possible,so they took up most of the space (raising the track volume didn't help) and thats why I didn't add any other sounds.
And when I added some sound FX's, the whole song just sounded awful (variation again)

Overall I found your review rather helpful, I realize now that I need to be more wary of repeating sounds, then again, at the time it sounded brilliant (In my opinion of course).
Thanks for the review!

bridge is best

My favorite part is 1:09. By far. I would listen to the song just for that part. Otherwise I'm not sure there is enough variety in the rest of the song. Even though there is variety from 20 sec to 45 secs, i think there could be more. :)

cool sound

I love the part at 0:35, how it goes quiet, and then BOOM the beat goes on. This has great potential! I think if it was made into a longer version with more variety it would be better!

haha, very blatant.

The beat is SICK. Especially during the chorus. All I would say is that it is a bit repetative during the verse, which makes me almost annoyed. You sing "just open wide" the same way you sing the rest of the verse. I do like the bridge a lot though! listened to it twice. I like your laugh in it. the semi scream at the end is... angry.

patrick-3005 responds:

hey dude, the open wide part is the chorus. that's why i sang it the same. the whisper parts are the verse. get it?

its nicee

I think it sounds a bit like evanescence. I think that the small things you edited into the song is what makes it good. Like the whisper at around 2 minutes.

Jessismith responds:

Thanks! Those whispers were my special touch...:)
(sorry for the late reply, by the way)

Age 34, Male

Graphic Design

OCAD University

Canada

Joined on 6/23/08

Level:
1
Exp Points:
15 / 20
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
1.74 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
0
Saves:
0
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal